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Tuesday, October 23, 2012
details
a. The number and types of actors required – 4
actors, 1 male, 3 females.
b. How many scenes each actor will be in and the
total length of their performances.
RICHARD: Six scenes
ROSE: Five scenes
Rachel: One scene
Counter lady: One scene
c. The requirements, number, and types of
locations. 3 Locations. Sexsmith house, Java cabana, Overton Park
d. The number and types of stunts and special
effects. 2 stunts. Richard getting slapped and Richard and Rose bumping into
each other.
e. What special costumes and makeup will be
required?
Richard: Two outfits. A t-shirt and shorts for
pajamas, and a shirt and jeans for everyday outfit.
Rose: A dress for pajamas and jeans and a shirt for
everyday outfit.
Rachel: A dress.
4 day shoot.
Tuesday, October 2, 2012
Scene opens with a white man seated on a personal
desk writing on a notepad. He tears off pages from it as he writes. After two
crumpled pages, he looks like he has had an aha moment. He turns around and
looks at his girlfriend.
RICHARD
(A 25 year old white male. He is a
comedian in midtown Memphis)
Hey babe.. babe..
ROSE
(A 24 year old white female. She is
a graduate student)
Yea, what is it?
RICHARD
Listen
to this, if apple made a car,
would
it have windows?
(Nods his head while smiling)
ROSE
….(Ignores)
RICHARD
Babe. Baby, would it have windows..
ROSE
Babe, just stop, stop it! I don’t
wanna hear your stupid jokes today
okay.
RICHARD
Stupid?
ROSE
Yes, stupid!
RICHARD
And just what do you know about
writing jokes?
ROSE
Nothing, but i know that's not funny.
RICHARD
Yeah well I cant cook but I know what
good food supposed to taste like.
good food supposed to taste like.
ROSE
And just what is that supposed to mean!
Brief silence.
Cut to both of them breathing heavily on the couch, Their clothing is folded and their hair is messy, suggesting that they just had sex.
Cut to both of them breathing heavily on the couch, Their clothing is folded and their hair is messy, suggesting that they just had sex.
SCENE 2
The couple is at a grocery store shopping.
ROSE
Babe what are you
doing?
RICHARD
Picking up some
cookies.
ROSE
I made some cake
earlier this week
RICHARD
OOhhh that was what that was supposed to be
Rose looks furious, but she changes her facial expression to a cheeky smile.
ROSE
(mischevious voice)
ROSE
(mischevious voice)
Whh.. Babe, lets fuck..
RICHARD
(Snickers and pokes Rose)
Babe, we just had sex this morning
Babe, we just had sex this morning
ROSE
Ohhh, so that was what that was
supposed to be?!
supposed to be?!
Cut to the couple in the car Making out.
SCENE 3
The couple is walking up the stairs to get
to their apartment. When this scene opens, they are already arguing.
RICHARD
And have you seen the couch lately!
It looks like shit! You know for a
woman you sure are dirty!
Silence
woman you sure are dirty!
Silence
ROSE
What did you just say ?
It is revealed that Richard was daydreaming.
RICHARD
And have you seen the couch lately!
It looks like shit!
ROSE
Well why don't you do something about it then!
RICHARD
Because its not my job Rooosee!
ROSE
RICHARD
Because its not my job Rooosee!
ROSE
what do you mean its not your job, you live in
the same goddamn apartment!
RICHARD
I wouldn't care to arrange anything because
you would take it right back
ROSE
What makes you even think like that!
the same goddamn apartment!
RICHARD
I wouldn't care to arrange anything because
you would take it right back
ROSE
What makes you even think like that!
Cut to make out scene near washer and drier.
SCENE 4
The couple is on the porch, when their
friend Natalie walks up to them to ask their opinion on something.
NATALIE
Hey! What do y’all think of this
dress?
Richard and Rose respond at about the same
time.
ROSE
Horrible
RICHARD
It sucks
Richard and Rose look at each other
awkwardly, and then look away.
Cut to them on the couch. They are
fidgeting and awkward around each other. They say the following at about the
same time.
ROSE
So we should probably go our
separate..
RICHARD
I think it’d be best if we break..
TOGETHER
Yea. Alright.
They get up from the couch, Rose approaches
with a hug while Richard anticipates a handshake. They awkwardly put their
hands away and walk in opposite directions.
TOGETHER
Okay
SCENE 5
Richard is on the porch of a girl he just
met, he has just gotten back from a date with her.
RICHARD
Yea, I really had a good time.
RACHEL
Me too. You wanna come in?
RICHARD
Sure!
They walk into the small apartment.
RICHARD
EARCH now that is an ugly couch!
RACHEL
Excuse me!
RICHARD
(Rambles on)
And the walls in here are pretty
messed up too, what’d you do paint
them yourself. I guess some of us
just aren’t cut out for that art
stuff huh!
He looks around and sees art supplies all
over the place.
RICHARD
(Smack his forehead) Oh!
She slams door on him.
This is followed by two more doors slamming
on Richards face, showing more failed attempts at dating.
SCENE 6
Richard is walking down the park, sad and
lonely. He bumps into an unknown female figure.
TOGETHER
Hey watch where you’re
going!
Hey watch it!
The two lock eyes and stare at each other
for a few seconds. They smile at each other in an exaggerated fashion and then
suddenly put on straight faces.
ROSE
Hey four eyes! watch where the hell
you're going!
you're going!
RICHARD
I wish that big mouth of
yours could
blow half as much as it talks!
Cut to makeout scene in the car.
END
Wednesday, September 19, 2012
test scenes
Rob walks in to the house, loosens his tie and smells candles in the house. He rushes to them and blows them off.
ROB
Honey, you know how I feel about lighting fires in the house
ROSE
Babe they're just candles
ROB
They're hazards! You need to stop putting them around the whole goddamn house.
ROSE
I would if you didn't leave the house smelling like shit all the time.
ROB
Its a condition Rose and you know it, stop pricking at me and just put the candles away okay!
ROSE
Can I exercise any of my rights without some kind of critisism!? Its like a freaking prison in here!
ROSE
Can I exercise any of my rights without some kind of critisism!? Its like a freaking prison in here!
Tuesday, August 28, 2012
Statement of Intent
Statement of Intent
The project is based on morality in the modern day, what people think is right, what they think should be TRUTH with a capital T or as some people would argue, whether or not everyone should live by their own truths.
What would these worlds look like in their extreme opposite poles? One would be strictly religious(Christian) while the other would be a world where everybody is free to do whatever it is they would like.
The skills I would like to develop are shot variation, in terms of when to use what kind of shot, medium, extreme close up etc. and make my shot selection add to the piece
I want to tighten my editing, my transitions, and SOUND! how well it complements the visuals.
Theme
Moral identity
Execution and tone
church look
crack house look
I have two major scenes, the first one is the crackhouse where thetone and mood will be dull, by color correction in the post production.
The church scene will be more lit up and clear.
Goal
The goal of the project is to have people think more critically about their personal and religious beliefs.
The project is based on morality in the modern day, what people think is right, what they think should be TRUTH with a capital T or as some people would argue, whether or not everyone should live by their own truths.
What would these worlds look like in their extreme opposite poles? One would be strictly religious(Christian) while the other would be a world where everybody is free to do whatever it is they would like.
The skills I would like to develop are shot variation, in terms of when to use what kind of shot, medium, extreme close up etc. and make my shot selection add to the piece
I want to tighten my editing, my transitions, and SOUND! how well it complements the visuals.
Theme
Moral identity
Execution and tone
church look
crack house look
I have two major scenes, the first one is the crackhouse where thetone and mood will be dull, by color correction in the post production.
The church scene will be more lit up and clear.
Goal
The goal of the project is to have people think more critically about their personal and religious beliefs.
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